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Recommendations for a thesis statement?

Recommendations for a thesis statement?

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Question by pond: Recommendations for a thesis statement?
I had to write a research paper discussing telecommunication and the novel Fahrenheit 451 by Ray Bradbury. I talked about how the telecommunication and technology in Fahrenheit 451 is similar to todays. My teacher gave me the paper back and said I need to have a thesis statement. Can someone help me with this?

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<333 Webster's dictionary defines telecommunication as the broadcast of signals over a distance for the purpose of communication. The initial means of telecommunication took place through simple things such as smoke signals and drums. Since then technology has grown leaps and bounds. For example we can now send information across the world, via e-mail, lightning fast. In the novel "Fahrenheit 451" by Ray Bradbury the seashells and wall televisions are eerily similar to advancements such as the iPod and big screen televisions. The telephone, which is one of the most common household appliances today, has been improved since it's creation in the 1800s. In 1970 the design for modular phone cords and jacks was presented. This design led the way for the modern telephone jack. The microcomputer kit also reached the market in the 1970s making computers available for home use. This was just the beginning of a world full of personal computers. In Fahrenheit 451 people watch giant televisions that take up entire walls. The televisions are enormous because they substitute interaction with other people. Comparable to the "wall televisions" are the massive plasma televisions we have today. In 2006 there was an 103 inch television presented at the Consumer Electronics Show. Another similar technological development is the iPod. The "seashell radios" in Fahrenheit 451 are used to listen to music and waste away time much like iPods are. Over the past twenty years there has been numerous breakthroughs in telecommunication so the next twenty can only bring more advancements. Scientists predict that in the future humans will be implanted with microchips. Perhaps they will be used to monitor daily activity in the future. Another prediction is that the internet will be completely free and ubiquitous. The world will do away with cash money and use electronic financial transactions in the future. As one can see telecommunication is an ever evolving technology. The advancements made in this area change the world we live in. Fahrenheit 451 showcases what happens when technology takes over daily lives. Whether or not our future is as bleak as the ultramodern world of Fahrenheit 451 is up to us and how we utilize our technology.

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Answer by McMurphyRP
A thesis statement helps you to focus your writing and organize your paper. One possible thesis statement for your paper is:

The telecommunications presented in the Ray Bradbury’s novel Fahrenheit 451 are similar to today’s telecommunications in the way that they substitute for interactions with other people and encourage people to waste time.

Then your essay should be reorganized with an introduction (the thesis statement often goes at the end of the introduction), one part (or paragraph) about category one (substitute for interactions with other people), one part (or paragraph) about category two (wasting time), and a conclusion.

Each part should have a topic sentence so that the reader knows that they’re up to that part of the essay, as introduced in the thesis statement. (e.g. “Another way the telecommunications presented in the Ray Bradbury’s novel Fahrenheit 451 are similar to today’s telecommunications are in they way that they help people to waste time.

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    June 12, 2014 at 12:17 am

    i have to write a paper in English about today’s economic crisis.in my thesis statement i have to state the problem,what obama is doing about it and then i have to write a recommendation for obama.can someone help me out here?! im in 10th grade so keep it on that level :p

  2. JOY says :Log in to Reply
    June 12, 2014 at 12:18 pm

    i wrote this for an intro for my assignment but my teacher says i need to change it around…… please help me i don’t get it?

    Human rights organization, Amnesty International, has invited committed members, as experts on human rights issues, to prepare reports on abuses of children’s rights around the world. The reports will be presented to the United Nations at an up coming conference.
    This report will investigate the issue of child labour. In particular, the report will address which countries use child labour, the causes and consequences of child labour, what is being done to resolve the issue and the effectiveness of the strategies in place to improve the situation. Finally, the report will present recommendations concerning the issue of child labour.

  3. GINA says :Log in to Reply
    June 12, 2014 at 6:18 pm

    Anyone have a recommendation for a completed/translated shoujo manga? I’ll read anything (: doesn’t have to be too popular, either. just something cute and enjoyable~

  4. WALKER says :Log in to Reply
    June 13, 2014 at 6:19 am

    im doingg a critical essay on ernest hemingway and imm sooo confused im doing a farewell to arms and the sun also rises. can someone help! i need a thesis too smh im qoing insane !

  5. LYNDA says :Log in to Reply
    June 14, 2014 at 1:35 am

    I mean should I put it like this?
    Title, Outline, Objectives, Problem, Methodology, Results, Conclusions, Recommendations

  6. ALICIA says :Log in to Reply
    June 14, 2014 at 1:35 pm

    Hi I am half from finishing this essay. This essay is about “Name”, what it means etc. I’d like to know my grammar errors and punctuation or words that are better to put in and thesis statement all kinda of stuff. In Addition, i need at least one more body paragraph and a conclusion since it’s a 2 page essay. TY please help me! Oh one last thing…it’s pretty important too, what Title should i have for this? my teacher wants a really good one…if you have any idea please state so ty.
    ————————————–…
    There are many people that are concerned about their names. They either don’t match their personality or are just bad names, and they usually are laughed at. Some people are lucky with their names because they aren’t funny and have meanings in them. For me, name isn’t an important part of my life. I think about it as if it’s just water, something that everyone needs to have every day, and it’s got no taste nor color. I usually wonder why some people worry about this little thing over other things in their life. Nevertheless, I am fortunate enough to have a name that means something and somewhat goes along with my character. The name that was given to me fit my personality so well that I wonder what the difference would be if my name was a different one. Name is probably the first thing that people judge us by; however it’s not something that should keep us from looking further into someone’s intelligence or creativity.
    In English my name means “The Moon”. My name reflects who I am because I am a night person. The definition of night for me is when it’s dark. If I want to go out, I’d go at night instead of morning. In fact, I hate morning. I don’t feel like doing anything at that time of the day. The only thing that I can imagine myself doing on weekends or holidays in the morning is sleeping or staying up late. I think one of the main reasons behind it is that I usually feel sleepy from not getting enough rest. In addition, I like to have some solitary time at night, like looking at the sky and looking at the stars.

  7. RODNEY says :Log in to Reply
    June 16, 2014 at 1:36 am

    I’m in need of two letters of recommendation from school. One of them is required to be from my school counselor. Now, I don’t really talk to my school counselor a lot.. is that a bad thing??

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